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illustration paragraphs

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To illustrate is to explain a general statement by means of more specific examples. Detailed and well-chosen examples add interest, liveliness, and power to your writing. Illustration makes what we say more vivid and more exact. A single example may also be a Narrative, a story that illustrates the topic sentence. Writers often use illustration to develop a paragraph. An illustration paragraph usually contains:

1. A topic sentence.

2. The body should have approximately three vivid and exact examples that support the topic sentence.

3. The examples should be put in order of importance and separated by a transitional expression.

 

Transitional expressions:

* for instance

* for example

* an illustration of this

* a case in point is

* to illustrate

* another instance of

* another example of

* another illustration of

* here are a few examples

 

4. A conclusion.

~Copyright 2005 Kelly Byron~


Here are some examples:

 

My Escape

Most people have special places where they go to relax and find inspiration. For example, my most relaxing and inspirational place to be is at Riceville Bridge. It is a peaceful pull-off area past Belt, Montana just before entering the Sluicebox, state park. My family and I have spent many times there. When I was younger my sister and I learned how to swim in Belt Creek at Riceville Bridge. My grandma is buried outside of Belt at the Belt cemetery, so when I want to get away I usually go out to Riceful Bridge and sit by the calming, peaceful Belt Creek. The sound of the rapid flowing creek, birds in the background, and the smell of fresh air makes me look back and remember all of the fun and exciting memories I have had with my family out there. It is also very peaceful to me because I feel like my grandma is watching over me, protecting me, and letting me know that life is sometimes very difficult but to never give up. Some times life for me is very difficult and frustrating. That’s when I turn to Riceful Bridge, because I know that I can sit out there and talk to myself and vent things out and feel like I have some type of connection with the atmosphere. It is by far my most relaxing and inspirational place to be because I feel very comfortable and wanted there.

~©Amy Neill 2005~


 

Wrestling

Wrestlers put in lots of time and effort to even become considered great or even somewhat good. Wrestlers run five miles every morning and lift in the mornings as a team. Practice go from two or two and a half hours a day. Practice includes takedowns and other technique work for athletes. They also have live matches and intense conditioning after words. Many serious wrestlers have to work extra by doing a hundred takedowns and stand ups a day to make them selves better. Dieting and strike workouts runs many wrestlers lives by haveing to make there weight limit every week. To be wrestlers , people have to be mentally tough and physically tough. It is a sport made for men, not little boys.

~©Jace Oeleis 2005~


College Students

Many college students face a number of pressures. For instance, many students have to manage a job while at the same time balancing their school work. This can be very stressful for a college student. Students also face many financial pressures. For example, numerous students have to pay for their college on their own. This gives them no other alternative bbut to take out student loans. Which could leave them in debt for many years. Another example of financial pressures for students is having to support a family while attending college. Supporting a family while attending college can be extremely difficult. Finally, many college students go to college students go to college in different cities and states and have to make new friends and adjust to a different atmosphere. Being a college student can be very rewarding but, there may also be a lot of pressures that need to be dealt with.

~Copyright 2005 Mike Sullivan~


Fun things to do in Great Falls

Many enjoyable activites in this area are inexpensive or even free. One of the favorites for recreational people in Great Falls is the River's Edge Trail. It is s beautiful walk along the river that goes for miles and there are many places to stop and enjoy the view. Along the way there is also Giant Springs which is a gorgeous place to have a picnic and feed giant fish or even go fishing in the river for a while. Another favorite for the recreational type is Gibson park. It is a great place to to take children and feed ducks, play on out door equipment, or have a picnic. For people who like to skateboardplay basketball or throw horseshoes, these things are all offered just on the side of Gibson Park. If you like to play in water there when it's hot you can go to the Electric City Warter Park. There is a pool to cool off in which is an inexpensive way to have fun, but another option is the Wave Rider which is a bit more expensive. People who enjoy movies Would like the Carmike Ten. It has many different theaters with a wide selection of movies. If you like to kick back, sit in the stands and watch cars race, the stock cars is the place for you. There are many ways to have fun in Great Falls without Spending a Fortune.

~Copyright 2005 Sara Bedwell~

True Friend

A True Friend

Many people believe they have true friends; three is no doubt in my mind that I have the best one out there. His name is Craig Jones, not is he only my boyfriend he is the best friend I could ever have. If Craig wasn’t in my life right now I probably wouldn’t be in school or making other important changes in my life. He has shown me so many wonderful qualities in myself that I was just throwing away. My most favorite quality I admire in Craig is that he would never insult me or make me feel less of my self for any reason. During the span of our relationship he has put up with some lies that I have come clean with and that is another huge reason why he is so wonderful. He can see that I love him too and that it was courageous for me to come out with my past. He looks pass the past and loves me for the person that I am today. A true Friend is one that is always encouraging and stands behind you in every decision that you make. I look to Craig for advice in tough decisions, and even if we disagree he still stands behind me in what ever decision I make. Those are some genuine qualities of a true friend.

~(c)Ashley Neill 2005~

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